Monday, September 17, 2007
10 for a broken halted journey
into a poets mind
a kicked ass from behind
this was sympathy
she was beng kind
an interwoven comment
as it unwinds
we are human
falters and reminds
you elysabeth faslund
are less human
a viking goddess
my new poem to you
Sir you are a gifted poet and immensely human too, comments if you see in poetic clarity act as a corollary to a poets soul, by the reader as ripples caused on his soul, by reading and absorbing the goodness of the poets mind, I call this healing and though I am just two years old to this medium, I feel poetry like photography is an art of healing, I am a photographer poet.. where images are more pivotal than text, and in poets as gifted as you text brings forth far powerful images adding them on the emulsion of a mans parched soul..yes sir the poem hunter reader is one lousy specie in the department of commenting I say this loud and clear among a few dead bodies that lie in this forum.
Writing is fine but reading poetry and translating them as comments is where the power of poetry lies, here commenting is about hitting below the belt getting even because you cant give what your wife wants, and has to borrow the tool s of the gardener, this is hate here at poem hunter where you judge a mans poetry by the pigmentation of his accursed fate..
I have been a quick learner thanks to Ryan, Howlin, Faslund, Ted Sheridan, David Hazzle Micheal Shepherd whom I read and avoid commenting..
Yes I am unlearning poetry..
He reads a poem now he gets ready to comment
Loosen his bowel to defecate his hate on your poetic thoughts
He is frustrated unable to raise himself up to satisfy his wife who uses the young
he calls you a prostitute, he wants you to give up poetry become a clothier
or sell trinkets on the side walk, he hates the color of your attitude
you write more truth in a single line than he writes aping masters of old..
at poem hunter commenting is a novice art… he shames you sending postscript
to Carter the Poetry God yes Poem hunter has racist poets who terrorize and bully
new poets.. the racist poets 61 years old a leg in the grave the Saywells, Foster
Blaines, James Foulk,1000 Poems old Ivan Donne Carsewell..
And God save you from the wrath of lady poets with menopausal minds that has
even stopped leaking good poetry …who hibernate as old wretched hags in the forum
of Poem Hunter dormitory of Hate..
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